Camile Carson was kind enough to visit my blog today and without further ado here she is!
I’d like to thank AJ for inviting me to her blog. As a fan
of her writing, I’m honored to be in such illustrious company.
I love mysteries, suspense and thrillers. Romance is a new
genre for me. Adding spice and a lot of hot flesh to a gripping plot is quite
easy. Romance enhances the novel and elevates it to new, orgasmic heights (pun
intended.)
I allow the characters to develop themselves. I have grown
to love them as if they were real. Letting the cast dictate the direction they
want to travel is a unique style. I never use an outline and am quite surprised
when I find out “who did it.” On “Lovers and Saints” my latest book published
by Siren, I had no idea who the murderer was until the second draft. Combining
a cast of suspects and creating a plot utilizing codes, religious icons, and
sinister villains is a craft I love. If I don’t know “who did it” the reader
might be surprised as well.
I hope you will enjoy “Lovers and Saints” as much as I
adored writing it.
STORY EXCERPT
Sam loved being a journalist. As a child she always carried
a notebook and pencil. Constantly jotting down events at school, Timmy falls
off bike, Cindy scratches knee, Mr. Robbins stinks. It was the beginning of her
life. She savored the words and flow of graphite over paper. Now, it was the
flurry of fingertips on keyboards, tape recordings, and texting. The technology
had changed, but not the words. Words wound threads of thought in her creative
head, twisting and turning until the perfect tapestry of thought was produced.
Samantha drove to the gas station and picked up two paper
cups of black coffee and a half dozen packets of sugar for Carl. Loving his
sweets, Sam felt a twinge of pity for the man and picked up a pack of donuts as
well. His stomach was bulging and his hairline receding, but that’s not what
bothered Sam. Carl always found a way to touch her, whether it be a pat on the
arm, a friendly embrace, or a seemingly innocent brush against her thigh.
Sensations of nausea would pang Sam as her skin crawled when he invaded her
space.
Briar’s park loomed in front of her. The iron gates stood
open. Rust prevented the closure of the security barrier. She could see dew
dripping from the birch trees. A small current of breath blew each tender leaf.
The park was beautiful this time of day. In a few hours, mothers with their
children in tow would invade the serenity and stillness that enveloped her.
Briar’s park was close to Sam’s home and work. Actually,
everything in Crompton was intimate. It wasn’t a small town like Mayberry, yet
far from New York City. As much as she loved the familiarity, Sam yearned to be
a reporter in a big city. One day, she would uncover a huge story that would
make her byline known globally. Smiling at this thought, she pulled her Honda
into the park and replaced her thoughts of fame with the crime scene ahead.
Yellow tape was being set around the pond, the adjacent
playground, and the picnic area. Carl had come through for her again. There was
no sign of the press. Once again, he had got Sam to the forefront of a big
headline.
“Hey, Copperton, what songbird sang for you this morning?”
Detective Grant Wilson yelled across the lawn. She waved and gave him a
flashing smile.
“Just felt like taking a walk in the park. What’s going on
here? Are you decorating for a birthday party?” Samantha liked Grant. He was
sturdy in build, tendrils neglected to lay flat against his slightly graying
hair. No matter how neatly dressed he was, she was always drawn to his unkempt
coif.
Despite Carl’s objections, Grant had introduced Sam to Paul.
There was symmetry that attracted the pair immediately. Grant used to tease Sam
that he hand-picked Paul just for her. Like Carl, Grant and Paul had been
lifelong pals in Crompton. The three played baseball, football, and
skinny-dipped in the stream outside of town. They were brothers. There was another
musketeer in the group, one that Sam detested. Andre was nothing like Carl the
simpleton, Grant the wise, and Paul the delicious.
“And, you brought coffee. That was sweet.” Grant reached out
and grabbed Carl’s coffee.
“Hey that’s for…the birds. Go ahead, enjoy.” Sam felt like
one of the family around Grant. Her acceptance into the group was smooth and
flowing. Sam thought this must be what having brothers was like.
“Where’s my—oh, you have it. A guy can’t even get a cup of
coffee anymore.” Carl joined the two. He started to put his arm around Sam, but
she moved slightly closer to Grant. Winking, Grant appeared to catch on.
“Sorry”—Samantha smiled—“Detective Wilson thought the cup
was his.”
“Grant thinks everything is his.” There was a bit of sting
to the sentence.
The three headed toward the crime scene. Samantha could see
a platform sandal in the grass. The closer Sam got to the body, she saw pieces
of clothing strewn about. Samantha turned sharply when a hand was placed
roughly on her shoulder.
“What the hell are you doing here? The press hasn’t been
called. Get back to your little office and write an article on the new
supermarket opening.”
It was Andre Carson. Samantha cringed at his stark attitude.
She hoped he would be playing cops and robbers elsewhere. Andre’s breath was
hot against her neck as he moved in closer. Sam could feel her heart beating
against her chest. Anger and a bit of sexual tension seemed to mount whenever
Andre was near.
“I was taking an early-morning walk and saw the police cars.
I’m nosy, remember?” Samantha shook his hand off of her. Glaring into his
sienna eyes, she shuddered under his gaze. Scowling at her, the lines around
his mouth touched the faint hint of a mustache. Andre always made Sam a bit
agitated and out of control. The aroma of his cologne stopped her, jasmine with
a bit of spice, she thought. He should be wearing garlic. Sam began to chuckle
at her own inside joke.
“You have no business here. Leave so the police can do their
work.” His intense voice penetrated her ears and made Sam’s knees wobble. His
black linen jacket brushed against her arm as it flapped in the breeze. Chills
ran down her back.
“Come on, Andre,” Carl chided in. “You know she is one of
the best investigative reporters around. She even broke the Franco murder case
last month. If it wasn’t for her, we never would have found the weapon in the
wheel well of Arthur Franco’s car.” Samantha was grateful for Carl’s gracious
interruption. It seemed that Carl was particularly protective of her when it came
to Andre.
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Great excerpt, Camile!! The book sounds fantastic! Thanks, AJ for having her as a guest. Definitely have to add this to the ever growing list of must haves. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for having me AJ! And a thank you to Nicole Morgan for visiting thus far. Good luck in the blog hop against homophobia AJ. Keep spreading the good word.
ReplyDeleteCamile
Ah, yes, this is a really good scene. I can almost envision the cops gathering like blackbirds in their trenchcoats, drawing Sam into their center. I got a racing heart and sweaty palms from this novel, Camile, and I think we'll remember Sam, Andre and her friends for a long time to come. it's one of the best I've read in a long time.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on writing a winner!
I wish you great success amd happiness, Erin O'Quinn